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IzzatQQDir

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Sorry friend, this game is not for me. I don't really like the tone and aesthetic I suppose? The story is pretty good tbh but the characters just don't appeal to me.

The MC is weird and his character just feels off? I know you try to make it psychological what with his conscience appearing in his dream and whatnot but it's just feels off. Hard to describe but I think the best way to make an example is the scene after you finally managed to unlock the ability to hand out punishment yourself.

The scene where two teachers visit the school and the MC demonstrated and punished the hell out of the girl. Prior to this, I haven't completed a lot of events, only Debbie's. So it's off seeing him punish the girls and the girls just mention stuff about events I haven't trigger yet. Mya giving her MC blowjob under the table despite I've only just unlock the ability to punish myself is.. off. Might be my own fault for not playing the game enough and focusing only on Debbie lol.

I go through the game never getting any event with Priti except Mr Wilson's request and suddenly, the MC punish the heck out of her during that one event. It feels disconnected from my playthrough lol.

The theme of BDSM also doesn't appeal to me so yeah. Sorry lol but this one is not for me. Maybe I will be back because the story and world-building really interests me. 

Not trying to sounds smart, but maybe you can try making the writing more light-hearted and add some humors. The story takes itself too seriously and it make the tone darker than it have any right to be. As of now, the character are not that memorable. Quirks and humors are keys to making memorable characters. Tone down the serious tone and give choices and routes that allow player to be either good or bad. Even if you did, the tone of the story is too serious making neither choice memorable lol. 

In any case, amazing game, very innovative. But it's just not for me. I wish you luck and hey, maybe I will replay this game. You're doing an amazing job and I sincerely hope it will be better in the future. Kudos!